[Slackdocs] NIS+NFS-HOWTO: native english speaker(s) wanted for stylistic reviewing
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Fri Sep 7 16:48:06 CEST 2012
Tony Senerchia a écrit :
> Reboot the server and check if all services are activated and use the
> right ports:
> # rpcinfo -p localhost
> What should the output be? What are "all services" and "the right
> ports"? Is that the list from "Define static ports for NFS and NIS "?
> I guess my comment would be that it looks great so far, but it might
> need some fleshing out and a little work on word order in some places.
> For instance, "Roaming profiles come in handy in setups like SOHO
> networks, schools, town halls or more generally any network where many
> users have to work on many different desktop clients. " might be better
> as "Roaming profiles come in handy in any network where many users have
> to work on many different desktop clients, like SOHO networks, schools,
> town halls, etc."
You're absolutely right, and I will try to do that in the days and weeks
to come. Before doing that, I have to fill in a vital piece of
information, about local NTP synchronization, which is an absolute
must-have for this kind of network.
As for the word order, feel free to change it. I like your suggestion.
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